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People take for granted,
The ability to do simple things,
I am dysfunctional,
So I can barely do these simple things.

My friends just don't understand,
How important cleaning the house it is to me,
Because they take for granted,
The ability to clean the house.

People go to work,
And do everything fast,
But I am slow,
So I might do a good job,
But I can not do it fast.

People chat with others all the time,
And they take for granted of this ability,
But I can not chat with more than one person,
So I just chat to myself.

I blog about my life and whats going on with me,
And nobody wants to read it,
They do not understand,
The pain of not being able to chat with others.

I feel so lonely and dysfunctional,
I'm stuck on disability benefits,
I just make fractals all day,
And take photographs too.

I wish my doctors could understand,
The complexity of my problems,
I can't get them to listen to me,
Because I have so many problems.

People take for granted,
The ability to do simple things,
I prize the ability to clean the house,
And work at a job people can do fast.

I hope you have learned something new,
That people take for granted,
The ability to do anything,
Without feeling in pain,
Without feeling depressed,
Without feeling manic,
Without feeling anxious,
Without heart problems,
Without seizures,
Without digestive problems,
Without problems period!
A rarity - Literature from me.
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Have to say this is well written and I like how you have put your own personal emotions and experiences to highlight the fact that you may be alienated from the world for various reasons. You have got a good grasp of imagery, voice/tone and I feel that with these qualities almost everyone can relate to what you've described some way or another.

I think that sometimes human beings judge normality on how others behave and those who think they're not the same as others the more they're convinced that something is wrong with them. There's nothing wrong with being yourself in life - you just have to accept your flaws as well as your strengths.

Overall, this is excellent! ^^
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Quie-Scent Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, and yeah, it is about being left with nothing, but letting everyone know that I don't take things for granted in life. If I'm dysfunctional, I find myself more capable of doing things and not taking anything for granted in life. It has been a long journey and I for one, do not stand a chance without the ability to not take things for granted. Haha, kind of running around the loop on my explanation, but you get it.
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chainedheart977 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
I'm glad you posted this :)
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Quie-Scent Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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Deislilsis Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Artist
i see, un...
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Quie-Scent Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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Deislilsis Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Artist
no problem, un.
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